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    Untitled (because I can) – A Poem

     

    Untitled (because I can)
    By: Theresa C. Richardson

     

    somebody

    somewhere

    a long time ago

    taught me this is the way a poem should go

    AA BB

    now one two three

    rhythm and rhyme

    all by the end of the line

    but now

    when a word won’t fit

    sometimes i use it anyway

    its all about creativity

    and me

    4:20 AM | Blog it

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    sherriwrote:
    I like it!
    Sept. 21
    Jacquewrote:
    I like this poem!
    June 13
    christinewrote:
    Waiting for your next post.......
    June 6
    The G Man -wrote:
    Hi Theresa,
    Hope all is well,
    I like the poem but seems like there should be more...

    Take care.
    June 4
    syed swrote:
    dear how are u
    June 3
    Karenwrote:
    Good for you! Isn't it funny how some folks can think there is "a right way" to be creative? :-)
    Have a geat week and keep on writing in your own creative way!
    June 2
    Curtiswrote:
    So thats hy I'm not a good poet. lol Hugs to you and yours hon. Have a blessed week
    May 31
    ♥ Aimee Archerwrote:
    perfect!

    ~*:.♥.:*~ because you shared a smile :o) someone's day got brighter... ~*:.♥.:*~
    May 31
    christinewrote:
    this was a good poem. I like it. it inspired me to look at my ideas about poetry and meaning. say what you feel.
    May 30
    syed swrote:
    dear you are kidding. but it is nice attempt. keep it up.
    May 30
    Happy Flowerwrote:
    Ah what great celebration of freedom when we know there are even 'rules' which can be sidestepped. Appreciate how much compressed into so few words.
    May 30
    Duckiewrote:
    I love it.........."When the word won't fit." Thanks, sweetie.

    Eileen
    May 30
    Touchwrote:
    You put a grin on my face as well especially when I realized "Wow; by following this formula I could quickly go from being no poet at all to the world's worst in a flash!" I would have failed English Lit so fast it would make your head swim if it hadn't been for my girlfriend doing all my assignments. I love to read but poetry and Shakespeare just don't click in what's left of my mind.
    May 30
    RedWillow ♥ My Place in the...wrote:
    This makes me smile. Very Creative.
    May 30
    Teriwrote:
    Love it Theresa!!
    May 30
    Bethwrote:
    Very creative. I like it!
    May 30

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