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    August 04

    Dwelling - A Poem

     

     

    Dwelling

    By: Theresa Richardson

      

    I sit here thinking

    I sit here and pout

    Working it over

    Working it out

     

    Mulling it over

    Again and again

    Replayed it so much

    Don’t know where to begin

     

    Thinking it over

    Always the same

    Maybe my mind

    was playing a game

     

    It really happened

    That way for sure

    Stuck in the memory

    There is no cure

     

     

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    Happy Flowerwrote:
    I do not know if you intended double meaning on 'dwelling' as home and as thinking on something a lot. Effective. Yes agree sometimes there is no cure, we can't make events that were irrational rational? Not sure if this what ending suggests but like the poem.
    Jan. 29
    Marowrote:
    Theresa,
       I can truly relate to this poem. Very well said....
       God bless you~Maro~
    Aug. 8
    Nancy COwrote:
    my days are frequently like that when the kids are on vacation!  Did they just do that!, Did I just do that!....=]
    Aug. 6
    When God is working on me, I get this way, sometimes, (most of the time), over thinking it and coming right back to the place I was when He first told me.  Amazinghow much we complicate the simple things.
    Aug. 6
    hi theresa, things are a bit hectic at moment, so tending to read through blogs rather quickly - have came back to read your poem today and yes I know where you are at, it is a place I have often been at, hanging on to, not letting go and letting god, thank you for the timely reminder, through your poem. god bless - nita.
    Aug. 5
    Bethwrote:
    After reading the poem a few times, I think I have figured out the meaning.  I like it.
    Aug. 5
    Poems. A way to shed some light without divulging the light source? Brilliant actually. Quite brilliant.
    Aug. 5
    Joewrote:
    I like to sit down and think of things that way.  Sometimes I think it's good to put it to a song as well.  I only wish I was good at putting notes together with it. 
    Aug. 5
    Petrawrote:
    This one makes me wonder what it's about!!! :)
    Aug. 5
    Bekswrote:
    great poem here! thank you for all your comments and support as I have been away during this last month!
    Aug. 4
    Debbie Cwrote:
    Hi Theresa, Nice post.  Your poems are very inspiring and always make me wonder what your thinking about. :o)  Hus, Deb
    Aug. 4
    Sarawrote:
    WOW, very good, this is so much better than what I can write. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!
     
    hugs...Sara
    Aug. 4
    Diannewrote:
    Great poem Theresa, I was always taught that it does know good to dwell on things. At some point we have to let go of things for our own well being. I have learned to give things over to The Lord and to trust Him with them and with my life. It is not always easy but when I do Jesus gives me peace of mind heart and soul. Blessings my friend and thankyou for all your prayers and your kind words. I appreciate that. :) Dianne
    Aug. 4

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